Definitely a victim of zerobombing; nice work.
Apparently someone felt like picking on a new audio submission just for the hell of it, but I'm here to let you know that this isn't bad at all.
I like the steady pace that it keeps throughout the song, and the usual 140BPM is a good pace for a slow-building song such as this. I do, however have just a little bit of advice for your next submission:
-I noticed that you used the PoiZone Demo, which causes that whistling sound every once in a while, but it actually didn't interfere with the song too much, so no worries there.
-Try to find a little bit lower bass synth to counteract the higher-pitched synths that you used as your lead.
Anyway, if it's okay with yoiu, I'd like to try and remix this song, giving you credit for the original, of course. I like the way it sounds, and would like to try to remix it, if you wouldn't mind. Let me know!
Anyway, 5/5, 9/10, and downloaded. Check out my stuff sometime!